Let’s be honest: there are plenty of “nice brands” out there.
Pretty logo. Pretty photos. Pretty Instagram grid.
The problem? Pretty doesn’t pay the bills.
If your copy isn’t pulling its weight, you can have the most gorgeous branding in the world and still be the best-kept secret in your industry. Okay okay, this is just a polite way of saying invisible.
The difference between a “cute” brand people admire and an industry leader people invest in? The words. Always the words. As a copywriter who has worked for everything from coaches to the world-renowned agency Ogilvy, I’ve seen this over and over.
A nice brand says:
“We offer coaching for entrepreneurs who want to grow.”
An industry leader says:
“We turn stressed-out solopreneurs into booked-out CEOs in 90 days without the burnout.”
See the difference? One’s an introduction. The other’s a promise.
Your copy either tells people what you do… or convinces them you’re the only one worth doing it with.
A nice brand’s copy sounds… well, nice. Polite. Safe.
It could belong to anyone in their industry.
An industry leader’s copy is unmistakable. You could read one line and know exactly whose brand you’re in.
It’s not about being the loudest. It’s about showing up with personality, perspective, and a point of view. Leaders don’t tiptoe. They take up space.
Your clients aren’t buying a package. They’re buying what life looks like after your package.
A nice brand might say:
“Website design and brand strategy for coaches and creatives.”
An industry leader says:
“A brand so irresistible your dream clients find you, trust you, and pay you, before you’ve even poured your first coffee.”
One lists services. The other sells a transformation.
Copy is confidence on paper.
Nice brands hide behind “safe” language because they don’t want to scare people off. Industry leaders know that turning off the wrong people is exactly how you attract the right ones.
If your copy reads like a public service announcement, it’s not going to get you industry-leader status. If it reads like an invitation to a world only you can create, that’s when people start paying attention.
Your visuals get people to stop scrolling.
Your copy is what makes them stay — and, more importantly, buy.
If you want to move from “nice brand” to “industry leader,” you don’t need a complete overhaul. You need words that:
Because in the end, the prettiest brand in the room means nothing if no one remembers what you said.
And if you want your copy to sound like an industry leader and sell like one? That’s literally my job.