If your website headline reads like it belongs on a corporate brochure from 2008, we need to talk.
Your headline is the first thing people see. It’s the split-second decision point between “let’s keep scrolling” and “where’s the exit button?”
The good news? You don’t have to be pushy, sleazy, or channel your inner used-car salesman to make people click that ‘Book Now’ button. You just need a headline that hooks them, fast.
Here are ten you can steal, tweak, and turn into your own.
Example: Imagine doubling your revenue without working more hours.
Why it works: Immediately paints the dream while removing the biggest objection.
Example: Stop guessing what to post. Start booking clients who find you irresistible.
Why it works: Simple, snappy, and makes the solution feel urgent.
Example: Because you deserve a brand that sells for you while you’re sipping margaritas in Mallorca.
Why it works: Emotional pull + indulgence = premium vibe.
Example: What if your website did all the selling for you?
Why it works: Piques curiosity without overpromising.
Example: The 5-figure months you’ve been working toward.
Why it works: Creates a feeling of arrival and relief.
Example: Ready to raise your prices without losing clients?
Why it works: Challenges the reader and invites them to take action.
Example: Finally — a brand that books dream clients while you sleep.
Why it works: The “finally” taps into the relief they’ve been craving.
Example: I help creative entrepreneurs sell out their offers with personality-packed copy.
Why it works: Direct, clear, and perfect for anyone who’s been told to “just say what you do.”
Example: Say goodbye to awkward sales calls. Say hello to clients who can’t wait to pay you.
Why it works: Feels like a fresh start in one sentence.
Example: When you’re ready for a brand that belongs in Vogue (and converts like crazy).
Why it works: Signals aspiration and sets a higher standard.
The perfect headline makes your potential clients feel seen, heard, understood, and like “this is the solution I’ve been waiting for.”
So, ask yourself:
If the answer’s no, you’ve got work to do. And if you’d rather skip the copy crisis, you know who to call.